the author protrays what seems like meaningless movement here and there, wasting the men's time and energy. It seems like a dream to the young soldier and he continues to get a feel for the emotions of the men around him.
when the battle finally becomes iminent he sees many men, older and more experienced than he in total dissaray, portraying the haphazardness that is most likely a very real part of any battle.
the authors sentences are choppy, I think, do either of you guys? It doesn' flow real smoothly for me.
I contunue to the the use of color and a variety of color related terms, Marti.